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November 19, 2012


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Banged Kanda/Allen/Lavi on the first mission? Totes realistic.

You can't fight wearing that.

Kanda doesn't swoon.

Boobs don't look like that.

Allen isn't a womanizing drunkard (stripper, perhaps /shot).

Care to credit that base / screenshot you usedtraced?

Where's her tummy? Lacking a few vital organs there, mate.

Same Innocence look and abilities as a main character? Creative.

Just synchronized with their Innocence and fighting Level Three Akuma? MIND BLOWN.

Bad news - your Japanese character looks... not Japanese.

Big boobs is Mary-Sueish/unrealistic? Wanna tell that to the well-endowed women of the world?

Is she supposed to look like a twig? Snap!

Lenalee doesn't act like Hitler.

Hey, your OC's so light in weight, she could blow away like a feather! Woosh!

Same scar that sees Akuma like Allen's does? Orly?

Half Noah, half Akuma? ....howwhy.

Two Innocence? Riiiight.

Lavi doesn't-- ... m'kay, maybe he does.

Why bother wearing anything at all?

When did he become a rapist? Oh, when he met your OC? They fell in love after that too? M'kay.

EVERYONE hates Lenalee? Guess I missed that in the manga/anime.

A fifteenth Noah more powerful than the Earl? Mmmmhm.

Lovechild of two males (KandaxAllen; LavixAllen; etc)? Totally.

How many long-lost sisters does Allen have again?

Oh, yeah, underage people get banged allllll the time at the Order.

Four year old general, you say?

You expect your underage OC to fight a war while prego. Bless you.

Banging Kanda, Allen, Lavi, Tyki, and Neah? Ho shit, dudette.


*Ahem* I'm always asked what my thoughts are on certain kinds of D.Gray-Man fan characters. So here ya'll have it. All I did was browse around and deviantART. Yeup. Chi is opinionated. But don't let that ruin your fun in creating fan characters the way you want to. Just keep in mind that there's a huge portion of the DGM fandom that aren't too fond of what they view as unrealistic fan characters c:
p.s. If you wanna debate with me on certain topics I listed, come on at me bro. Come on at me :iconcomeatmebroplz:

BACK TO HOMEWORK :iconrunrolanrunplz:
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LLAladonna Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
I'll admit, I've done two of those, but only in personal rps. 
FadedNobody Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
....o3o thus I've avoided all of these problems.... Instead of using a person I used a half dead ferret.... shit like that happens right? i mean there was a koala even though tat had a person to it... could it just be a ferret?
-is lost to the land of wonders-
ChikitaWolf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love ferrets

You mean General Nyne's monkey? xD
I'm quite certain Parasitic Beast type Innocence need an Accomadator/tamer, haha.

does Narnia count because I get lost in Narnia a lot
RavenTheFallen Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
I have two things to say. Not mad, just saying:

1.It CAN be okay to have JUST synchronized and fight level threes and even above, BUT there has to be a story behind it. Like the reason for mine was she had come into contact with not only Akuma, but also Noah before. (She only saw them) And is friends with a exorcist. She had hit her head while getting pushed out of the way so she doesn't rmember the encounter, and barely remembers her friend.
With a story like that, I think it's okay.

2.Kanda doesn't look Japanese either, but he is too.

Just some things to think about :3
ChikitaWolf Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No probs - I like healthy discussion!

1. I'd have to disagree on this, because having just synchronized with Innocence doesn't immediately equate to a ginormous power-up in skills and abilities. Innocence's power grows off of the bond between itself and the Exorcist as they fight Akuma (hence, "synchronization" - the higher the syncro, the more powerful the weapon).

While your character (who sounds quite interesting, might I add o: ) may have had past run ins with things related to the Holy War, she wasn't fighting with her Innocence (if I'm reading your comment correctly). For instance, a comparison to this would be: having been in fights/brawls before, and therefore upon touching a sword for the first time, being a master swordsman. Canonically, Hoshino even made it clear that when Allen got his sword, he trained with Kanda to be able to use it affectively.

Furthermore on a canonical note, Allen Walker, who had trained with Cross for years, had issues taking on a Level 2, despite his experience with using his Innocence. Even throughout the Miranda arc, he had problems and hurdles in taking down Level 2s, despite his past training with a General. Also, the highest immediate syncro rate we've seen is from Timothy, who was able to take over a Level 2 Akuma. However, he wasn't even able to scratch a Level 3. We've also seen the struggles from Lenalee, Lavi, and Bookman in trying to fight Eshi, the Level 3 Akuma (all of whom, once again, were experienced in both fighting and using their Innocence). Hell, Lenalee was forced to max synchro, risking her life in her efforts to defeat Eshi. To say a character who has just synchronized with their Innocence for the first time could fight Level 3s (and even above?!) simply isn't realistic, looking at these examples from the manga.

2. Do you mean by Hoshino's artwork or . . .? Because Kanda does have the style of the Japanese clothing-wise, as well as the black hair and whatnot. You look at some of the other OCs on dA, and you'll find incredibly tall, voluptous women with natural blonde or ginger or whatever hair. That certainly isn't an attempt to portray a Japanese character, don't you think? (Note, I'm not being stereotypical, just realistic on an ethnic scale).

Sorry for the long ass response xD You indeed made me think!
RavenTheFallen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Okay, I agree on the Akuma part...

And mostly on the Kanda part.

The thing is you ARE right when it comes to such a thing as bright natural ginger hair, but it IS okay to be a little different. Like my OC who is Kanda's hight AND Japanese, BUT like you said other than her eyes (which I couldn't help but make green)she has mostly Asian features. AND (because I knew she would need a reason for her height and eyes) it is even revealed later when she was talking to Allen about her mother that her grandfather was from Britten, so she's not 100% Japanese.

Thanks alot you've really made me thing, and change my OC for the better!
ChikitaWolf Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, of course! My DGM character is Cherokee, British, and Swedish (mother half Cherokee, half British; father full Swedish). Spicing things up doesn't hurt, as long as you know what you're doing, haha. It's what makes creating characters so much fun :D

No probs! I love talking about DGM and character creation =u=b Good luck with your OC!
RavenTheFallen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Thank you, and good luck with future OC's to you :3
Jodipher Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Chi, this brings me so much joy <333 :iconmumcryplz:
ChikitaWolf Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that icon brings me so much joy :iconpapmingplz:
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