You can't fight wearing that.
Kanda doesn't swoon.
Boobs don't look like that.
Allen isn't a womanizing drunkard (stripper, perhaps /shot).
Care to credit that base / screenshot you used
Where's her tummy? Lacking a few vital organs there, mate.
Same Innocence look and abilities as a main character? Creative.
Just synchronized with their Innocence and fighting Level Three Akuma? MIND BLOWN.
Bad news - your Japanese character looks... not Japanese.
Big boobs is Mary-Sueish/unrealistic? Wanna tell that to the well-endowed women of the world?
Is she supposed to look like a twig? Snap!
Lenalee doesn't act like Hitler.
Hey, your OC's so light in weight, she could blow away like a feather! Woosh!
Same scar that sees Akuma like Allen's does? Orly?
Half Noah, half Akuma? ....
Two Innocence? Riiiight.
Lavi doesn't-- ... m'kay, maybe he does.
Why bother wearing anything at all?
When did he become a rapist? Oh, when he met your OC? They fell in love after that too? M'kay.
EVERYONE hates Lenalee? Guess I missed that in the manga/anime.
A fifteenth Noah more powerful than the Earl? Mmmmhm.
Lovechild of two males (KandaxAllen; LavixAllen; etc)? Totally.
How many long-lost sisters does Allen have again?
Oh, yeah, underage people get banged allllll the time at the Order.
Four year old general, you say?
You expect your underage OC to fight a war while prego. Bless you.
Banging Kanda, Allen, Lavi, Tyki, and Neah? Ho shit, dudette.
ARE YOU INCAPABLE OF CHOOSING ONE MAN? MAX OF TWO? NO? GOOD GAWD.
*Ahem* I'm always asked what my thoughts are on certain kinds of D.Gray-Man fan characters. So here ya'll have it. All I did was browse around Fanfiction.net and deviantART. Yeup. Chi is opinionated. But don't let that ruin your fun in creating fan characters the way you want to. Just keep in mind that there's a huge portion of the DGM fandom that aren't too fond of what they view as unrealistic fan characters c:
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