literature

__The Path__

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I am running; forever running.
There is no path.
There are no surroundings.
There is only blackness.
And I am running through it.

But then, a light flashes far ahead of me.
It is bright and warm and welcoming.
Its sweet song calls to me.
I am running towards this light.

But now the ground shakes beneath me.
My vision blurs, and for a moment I stumble.
There is now a path.
It is thin and rocky and weak.
On either side is empty blackness.
I am running along this path.

There is a loud bang that resonates through the air.
From either side of the path I'm running on, sound bursts forth
It is loud and deafening and distracting.
I cover my ears—
I am still running.

And now images appear.
They are dancing obnoxiously around me.
They want my attention.
They are distracting me.
They are leading me off of the path.
I close my eyes—
I stumble.
I fall.

I am hanging by my arm from the path.
Blackness swirls below, eagerly reaching out to me.

I am in pain.
The path is exhausting.
The sound is deafening.
The images are blinding.

The light is fading.

I reach up, but there is no one.
I call out, but my voice is unheard.
I search frantically for the light from where I hang, but I can no longer see it.

I am going to die.

Please, God, help me! Somebody, help me! Anyone!

And just as the path is crumbling under my fingers—
As I am slipping—
As I am going to fall—
As the blackness lunges for me—

A hand grips mine.
A firm but gentle hold.
I open my eyes.
I see a figure.

I am pulled up.
I am placed back onto the path.
I regain my balance, and my senses return.

I look up.
There is a figure of light.
Its hand is outstretched towards me.

I reach forward.
The figure disappears.
I am surrounded by something warm.
Something protective.
Something passionate.

The path before me is smooth.
The sound around me is but a murmur.
The images taunting me are pushed away.

I am running again.
I am running towards the light.

And with help, I will get there.
There's no doubt about that.
This is something a couple months old :XD:

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^ Blame that. Not necessarily the video, but the song used in it =P (skip to 0:18)

I don't know why, but while listening to it, I had this sudden overwhelming urge to start writing. Or typing, as I prefer typing in Word Document over writing on paper. Anyway, I found myself just typing; I wasn't even sure of what I was typing, I don't think. I just kind of... typed. And this is what happened...

What is it that you seek?
What is it that blocks your path?
Who is the one who picks you up when you fall?

Just something to think about, I guess :P

//lolrandom
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Kuraun-Kuraun's avatar
Wonderful writing as always! I must say, I especially liked that last stanza. It does a great job with wrapping up the poem. And it has a nice ring to it. =)